Torn
NO! You chose - you left, I changed.
NO! You chose - to drugs you're chained.
NO! You chose - you walked, we died.
NO! You chose - gave up, I tried.
NO! You chose - to steal, to cheat.
NO! You chose - you hid, were beat.
NO! You chose - you ran, took flight.
NO! You chose - your heart, no fight.
NO! You chose - I broke, I wept.
No! You chose - your love, you kept.
YES! You're close - your eyes, they burn.
YES! You're close - your arms, I yearn.
YES! You're close - your scent, drawn in.
YES! You're close - soft mouth, "that" grin.
YES! You're close - my pulse, so fast.
YES! You're close - my wish, please last?
YES! You're close - the truth, I see.
YES! You're close - your soul KNOWSÂ me!
YES! You're close - my skin, aflame.
Yes....you're close.... -.... our love.......the same.
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Beautiful xxx
Thank you Jamie, much appreciated.x
Wow Donna!!.........I really liked this formatting.........at first glance I didn't think I'd like it........but you have some great, succinct phrasing here..........it's a compelling read........because once you start.......you have to see where this goes.........great word choices.........well done my friend........gonna check out some more of your stuff............Love and Rockets!!...........T xo
Enjoyed this Donna, especially how you chose to express it
Very original and unique, well done much love nardine xox.
Wow high praise indeed, thank you! I often worry that the first few lines may not grab someone's attention and therefore it will be bypassed. I like trying out new styles out of my comfort zone so it's great to get this kind of feedback.xox