Poem -
The touch of love
I will always think
Of you
In my tears your
French grace rests
And in my heart
Your gentleness
The sea
What is the sea
A vastness in which
I am lost
So, I think
There is no
place left to die
But together with you
In the touch of love
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Comments
I really liked this piece Jai, a really sensitive and romantic write!! Well structured, liked the break after
The sea, What is the sea, A vastness in which, I am lost ............ then the break and .........So, I think ...... A pause with which to ponder!! Read well, and I loved the last four lines. Very touching, enjoyed! A nomination from me Jai:)
Jai feels the warmth of Rachel's words
and is grateful for this, thank
iuuuuuuuuu Jai :)
lovely write congrats x
Thank you Susan!
Glad you enjoyed:)
All the best from Jai :)
Wow. This is beautiful! Short, sweet, and tender. The best things are often so. Hats off to you for this. :-)
Thank you Random, your comments
are always so thoughtful and positive
for the soul.
Kind rgs Jai :)
I know far too many people with hearts full of hate who choose despair. It's taught me a profound appreciation for those who bring beauty into the world. You've been a bringer of beauty. Thank you for that!
you know the Buddha brought beauty
through suffering
jai is not Buddha I am more like
mr bean
I am really very silly in my heart and
love humanity for what it can be
tandom random I don't know who you are but you are here thank God; how lucky is Jai to have a reader called random enigma!!
You do me much honor! I believe it is those who are silly at heart who are more capable of wisdom than anyone else. Thank God for you as well! I'm pleased to be one of your readers
Merry Christmas Random,
:) Luv Jai