Poem -
Translucent Emotions
Body runs on fear.
Precious lies found out.
Desperate for attention.
Can't forgive snarky embarrassment.
Harassing images proven,
Causing walls for protection,
But scars on full display,
Reflecting to other victims.
Judgement spins all truths.
Life unravels,
Leaving ruined emotions.
Unleashing pain.
Cutting features clear.
Blurred mixed emotions.
Truths scraped away,
Leaving demented lies.
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Comments
thanks so much!!
Intense and strong, sublime muse and description here. Care to tell what's it actually about just to be sure I got it? Kudos.
pleez do review/ comment my newest poem too, and happy new yr!
This poem really reflects a period of time I just went through. I am mostly keeping it a mystery to readers, cause I want them to really think/ wonder about this. Im sorry I cant say what it really was about!
Pinned this for further investigation.
thanks! I like how its a mystery for everyone who has read it!
Superbly etched, bravo Ella! Pinned for perfection
( the title: is that suppose to be "emotions")
yes its emotions thanks!
This is raw and powerful contemporary free verse poetry at its ultimate best, Ella.
A proud poetic tirade rife with genuine emotion.
Well penned!
~Dean Kuch
aw! thanks!
My pleasure. :)
Brilliantly executed!
thanks!!