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Trapped...

Trapped...

Rattle my rusty cage,
You might awaken,
My curtained face,
My mind,
As a silhouette,
Shadowed,
By my inner guest,
An unwanted voice,
Tireless efforts have drained,
I want to speak,
But my fear is, I've left it too late,
Speak child,
Speak,
For you must be yourself,
Tears cried,
Drowning,
For a life worth, I'll still pretend,

Trapped.

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Tony Taylor

Wow!! Sir WAYNE!!.... this is such a STELLAR read...... the imagery painted here not only brings the picture to life.... but..... It blows away the minds eye because of the unique and clever nature of the phrasing ~ almost surreal in places bringing the whole idea of 'alienation' to light beautifully!!.......PINNED!!......truly compelling stuff my friend!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!........T xo ๐Ÿงโœดโค

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Wayne Stubbs

Hello there Tony! Thanks very much, I've not been on here lately, it's fantastic to hear from you! I hope you and Cherie are doing well, thanks for excellent comment, I appreciate it! โ˜ฎ๐Ÿ’– brother! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

p.s, have you got any new music about?๐Ÿ‘๐ŸŽถ

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Tony Taylor

WAYNE ~ Just finished putting together my mini-studio in my house..... recording the skeleton tracks for an 11 song album right now...... which will take about three months...... then I take those and digitally send those to my producer in Vienna, Virginia, just outside of Washington DC....... he will add the Strings, Keyboards, Horns etc...... then I physicallyย go to the big studio in June and we do all the vocals and final mix-downs....... then we play for some 'test audiences' and then, based on those responses, we do final mixes and release the whole album by September -October...... So, I will send you some tracks, for your lyrical feedback, in the next few months!!.......whadd'ya think?....... you cool with that?........talk soon brother...... peace n stuff.......T xo ๐Ÿง

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Wayne Stubbs

That's fantastic to hear to Tony! The ball is definitely rolling then! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ I can't wait to hear it! Roll on September/October I say, well done ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ โ˜ฎ๐Ÿ’– brother! ๐Ÿ˜Š

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