Poem -
Falling in Love
I am falling in love. In love with life.
In love with people who open my mind to knew ideas and skip a beat in my heart out of excitement for something new.
I'm falling in love with simplicity.
White walls, one flower, and small moments like filtering your fingertips through clear water.
I'm falling in love with sound.
The sound of different languages, music on the streets, and bicycles ringing down below.
I'm falling in love with the smell of coffee and roses.
The smell of fresh baked bread a that sends a warm feeling straight to your heart.
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Comments
Hi JAQUELINE!!.......this was a VERY compelling piece......... because the title leads you to believe something else........ but the simplicity found within the write was refreshingly positive......... and observant ~ which is a sign of good writer........thanx for the read.........ALL STARS........ well done......... and. .......WELCOME to COSMO!!..........T xo
this is brilliant, jaqueline, very fresh, and I agree with all that my brother T said, 'refreshingly positive' indeed, what a terrific approach to a poem, subtle play on words that change everything, you are very creative and clever, enjoyed this very much....really good write, cheers....I'll def read you again
what great poem I loved it
Hi Jacqueline,
I think someone who first falls in love with life, will have a much easier time finding her soulmate. For she and he, will know one of the criterion, is the mate, that like them, loves life. Thus, the common gentle bond that leads to each others souls.
Peace and Love,
xox Larry
very positive 5 star vote