Poem -
Tree World
The world we entered as little boys,
Lost in a fantasy; all things our toys!
Adults said; don't play with that mop!
Not playing, it's my gun; I'm a cop!
Then leave to find peace in the trees,
No one looks up or behind the leaves.
Free! we could be anything we want!
Swing like monkeys, or birds to taunt!
Build a fort with our collected wood,
Now we were pirates; or Robin Hood!
None could find us in our fortress tree,
The birds gave up; learned to let us be.
How I miss swinging in my happy tree!
Fantasy world; allowed us to be free!
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Thanks for the read and like Greg!
Thank you Magic!
No, thank you Jim for making me Smile! Love this work, pleasant contrast and refreshing for me as always my friend! Hope you are well. Your friend Max
Glad you got a smile Max!
Thank you JP!
Thanks Syd for the like! I was trying to spur you on to health, I really hope you take care of your self!
Thank you Rob for the support, and I'm glad you could connect! wasn't sure anyone would care about my childhood adventures.
Awwww love thisun coz it’s magic!!! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️💕💙💕🦉
Jill, I simply combined childhood memories with this wonderful illustration,and believed it was not my best work, so for you to love it so much astonishes me! you will have to message me the reasons for your love of this !...........................................................lad
I love it coz it makes me feel magical & young again 💕⭐️💕
Infact it may well be my favourite poem ever!!!! ⭐️🦉
Infact it may well be my favourite poem ever!!!! ⭐️🦉💕💙💕
wonderful poem
Thank you Greg for your wonderful support!
Thank you Hj my friend!
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hugs back at you Marion!...............Jim
Oh Jim what a delightful poem expressing the innocence and freedom that should be childhood. It's so sad how a lot of us lose our childish fantasy spirit. It really was a dreamworld where everything was possible and everything could be anything. Love this! Excellent poem. All stars ☀🙂❤
Thank you Shelley-Anne! "like a little child, such is the kingdom of heaven"
Jim, just the tonic and a real shot in the poetry arm as well.
Wonderful to read your poem that sweeps me away on a journey and to also recall childhood memories too!
Love the rhyming construction and your last two line payoff too.
Oh to be free, innocent and carefree.🙂
Five deserved stars and thank you for writing and sharing Jim.⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
glad your well Shaun! thank you good to see your comments!