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Tribute

Sad

You were my friend this I shall never forget, and you left this word leaving me with regret 
lots of things got in both our way ,I never got the chance for what I had to say 
I'm sorry we didn't have that  time
you truely were the best friend of mine
I remember the days we put the world to right 
we were there for each other day and night
it's sad how we slowly drifted apart I miss you more now with all my heart 
everyday I sit and think of you and all the  silly things we both would  do it's the only thing that gets me through the day I wish all these stupid things hadn't got in our way 
I'm sure your up there looking down and see the deepest regret I have Inside me 
sleep easy my friend till we meet again the only happiness I have is knowing your now not in pain 

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Jim "The Lad" ....

cool write!.and your membership date I just noticed.is on my birthday! fun stuff!.........................................................................................Jim

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Tony Taylor

Dear LORRAINE,  this is such a fine unburdening that you have shared with us here....and a truly loving tribute to a person whom you obviously loved very much......In sadness and grief some of our finest work as writers emerges....you have done your friend proud with this piece....of that I am quite sure.....you can feel the love, regret, ups and downs, just oozing from and through the phrasing and imagery you have painted with words here......The melancholy and deep sadness comes through quite profoundly my friend!!......I am sorry for your loss and so glad to see you handling it head on with these words from the heart!!.......ALL STARS & PINNED!!.....well done dear poet sister!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo  : )

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Lorraine Anderson

Thank you very much for your comment means alot to me she will always be missed and saddened I had no time to make things right I hope she is looking down and see what I have written, this would be so amazing to know she actually new how I felt again thank you so much xx

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