Trickle Down

the gold trickles
long and thin
down the mountain
and it's beautiful.
slow,
yet momentarily irrevocable.
We exist
only for a moment
but hopefully
forever
in the minds
and on the tongues
of mere thoughts
not yet conceived.
Someday,
we shall all be
a sparkling trickle
of water down a mountainside
that catches the sun so perfectly
as to glow gold.
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Comments
Wow, no bs Gina; one of the best metaphors I've ever read...loved how you expressed the spiritual element and constructed this poem with a flow that accelerates, a vibrate organic tone with movement comes across to the reader...felt this one; thought provoking intelligent write...much enjoyed
thank you so much ! im glad the motion was picked up on i tried to express it very genuinely and innocently