Poem -

Trickle Down

the gold trickles

long and thin

down the mountain

and it's beautiful.

slow,

yet momentarily irrevocable. 

We exist

only for a moment

but hopefully

forever

in the minds

and on the tongues

of mere thoughts

not yet conceived. 

Someday, 

we shall all be

a sparkling trickle 

of water down a mountainside

that catches the sun so perfectly

as to glow gold. 

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Christopher Correia

Wow, no bs Gina; one of the best metaphors I've ever read...loved how you expressed the spiritual element and constructed this poem with a flow that accelerates, a vibrate organic tone with movement comes across to the reader...felt this one; thought provoking intelligent write...much enjoyed 

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Gina Marie

thank you so much ! im glad the motion was picked up on i tried to express it very genuinely and innocently 

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