Poem -
The Triumph
Your eyes lied to me despite the spellbound smile on your face.
You touched me with the borrowed gloves of a criminal so careful not to leave a trace.
Your whisper was of a Winter's cold wind.
I didn't want it to stop but never knowing how to begin.
Sometimes what we crave prepares despair's shallow grave.
Your deceit resurrecting hate, the demon of such a cruel fate.
Your false soul has now been revealed.
Now my dignity you can not steal!
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lovely poem and great show of strength much enjoyed cheers x
Thank you Susan!!
Beautiful poem! Shows strength.
I'm trying everyday to be stronger...
Well written, great poem.
Thank you very much!
very good poem, deep and thought provoking, all the best
It's a shame that heartache brings it out in us...thank you for your kind words
This was a perfectly written poem that needs to be heard and recognized. I applaud it with a standing ovation.. great piece.
What a compliment!!!
wow girl  every word shows the feelings that you had at that moment in time, and how it effected you and how you overcame those feelings , and most of all how you have risen above to come back as you
Hey Stranger!
Congrats Josie x
Thank you so very much!!!!! Â I'm so shocked!!!! Â This is the best day of my life!!!!
This is brilliant, well done and a big CONGRATS on your win, well deserved. :)
Thank you Louise!!!!!
Hey Josie,
A poem of a powerful woman not to be recond with and truly in charge of her own faith, not allowing the inner distractions as well as the outter obstacles, to ever again, render her strong determination, to be forever in charge of her, own structured, (womanly made) and proud fate....A powerful poem of abilities under control and stead fast, in her thinking's and demands, for her self preservation....congratulations on the win well deserved...
Kindest regards,
JimÂ
WOW!!!! Thank you so very much Jimmy!! You nailed it right on the head with this compliment!!!! Much appreciated:)
You are most welcome Josie, it appears the woman are leaving us men in the dirt, as it pertains to the poetry category and the art and i for one is one of the (main) slackers and need to step up my game....The men are hanging in there, with the stories..... Again, a powerful poem Josie and words well spoken and understood to the fullest.......Great works and we enjoy the read of all your works...
Kindest Regards,
JIMÂ
Congratulations.
wow. so good