Poem -
Raw Essence
You understood I was tired of constricting chains.
To reach me was to instil passion that never wanes.
You knew life was becoming more than I could bear.
To reach a heart you had to show someone did care.
You realised more than anyone else what I sought.
To touch a damaged soul you gave all you brought.
Never had I experienced such a spirit of generosity.
Never could I deny all you wished to share with me.
Now, I have learnt the real meaning of existence.
It's because of you I've uncovered my raw essence.
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This is all we really have in the end, isn't it?!
That need and desire to reach out and connect on a level that is both simple and profound.
Something which you capture here with simplicity and profundity.
Exquisite!
J ;)
To connect with another soul is everything, both on a physical and spiritual level.
Thank you for your kind remarks on my poetry.
Wishing you all the best. :)
Essences Of Beauty!!...... keep schoolin' us SIR WATERS!!........ great stuff!!...... LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo. ?✳✴☀
:) So pleased you like this one !
Best wishes to you !
Hi Richard, great lines, great write. Cheers.
Thank you ! I did enjoy putting this together.
Warmest wishes to you. :)
Hey Richard this is a wonderful pen. I am still searching for the right passion in my life but I have no doubt I will find her when I least expect it . Loved the write . Bradford
So pleased you enjoyed this as I put a lot of effort into it !
Love is everything to me and I know it is to you as well.
Wishing you the very best as always. Take care my friend.
:)
Hi Richard,
Your "Joan of Arc" came to rescue you. Unlike anyone from your past, she read your heart perfectly, and knew the stairway to your soul. She knew all the right "stuff" to save he Knight in Shining Armor, and in his "Raw Essence", uncover their everlasting love.
Peace and Love,
Larry xxx
To share this world with a soulmate who has given you so much creates a special feeling with all the associated emotion.
Peace and love.
Warmest wishes. :)