True Gardener
Only,ย
a true admirer
of Adam's lush green gardens,
and this wicked abilityย
to pick a rose
if ever chose
may it please....me.
Purposeful blood
in sacrificial amounts
spared on first broken thorn,
branding hidden messaged marks
conduce to why we were born.
Grinding the rest of sharpness bare
stripping pedals is ugly
but with artistry love and deep fascinating care,
really seeing down to inner roots
~pure beauty.
Lividity red
such a tale of blood,
garden smells permeateย
meticulously calculating heads
to the trail of bread crumbs,
far off.....
it's not
if questions come fromย
forests thoughts,
or those daring to challenge
miracle growth of planted seeds.
Who plants ideas?ย
Ye, onesย
singing to flowersย
as they're pulled
knows....
crops o' drooping dreamsย
will litter failed worlds
to bring others unto,
an unseen dimension.
As what appointed righteousness
approach, minds closed
these days scratch brains
scarring memories,
at least....opening eyes
across headliners front page news,
where mad man burried eve
in apple tree fields.
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This is an absolutely stunning narrative delivered in poetic prose...... with an "Olde English" type voicing that takes my breath away D!!.......speaking to the Garden of Eden story...... but taking the gardener to a place of evil intent and mesmerizing the public perceptions...... where men take over and lead with the death of Eve secretly murdered....... covered up so that deviously planted seeds can rule that public perception and keep us from the true possibilities and capabilities of human endeavor....... with the pretty flowers a faรงade that create lemmings and molded minds away from ultimate truths that lay buried...... and still await discovery...... if only we open our potential to the idea of man's vestigial capability......I am rambling brother...... because this lit me up from the inside......I love it....... perhaps I've gone a bit overboard.... but for me........ this was amazing!!....... wow!!.......PINNED this one...... so that perhaps one day I'll truly understand it........LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo
Man....T, I absolutely love your interpretation. You give a whole new look to my weite that what my crazy ass mind was thinking lol. Lets just say True Detective inspired this. Iam glad that you liked this because I didn't know how it would be received. Thanks so much big bro. Much love and peace to you.
Devon, this is amazing, enough 'stuff' in this one for two or three poems...and it 'lit me up' as well, though I can't just randomly rattle off a Shakespearean qualityย ย Soliloquize like Mr. Taylor (take it easy, Tony, lol) no doubt inspiration moved your pen beyond the stratosphere of ordinary poetry....standing o! Mr. La Porteย
Why thank you Mr. Correia. How yaย been man? Yeah that Tony Taylor has a masterpiece everytime pen touches paper lol. Sometimes your unsure wether to go on or stop short this one came out naturally and felt right lol. I appreciate the comment Chris. Will be coming your way. Peace!
wow this is amazing, I wish I was more gifted with compliments Like Tony, Cherie and flowergirl. just so you know I always mean what I say. some who are in such a hurry to moment forget to really say how a poem makes them feel. I feel total intrigue... I want more.
You know PoetessDarkly you are absolutely right, and from now on I have to make that a point when I comment to at leasg establish how the poem made me feel. I like that idea. Hey we can't all have the same abilities as some who are able to really delve into things and understand their true meanings, and I can't even do that half the time so I listen to what the words speak to me. Thanks so much, and you just wait......There's more lol.ย
wow! This is great stuff
Hello Amber how have you been? Thank you, I really do appreciate the comment. Hope all is well.
I've been well. Your welcome, I enjoy reading your work