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TRUE LOVE

TRUE LOVE

Loving you is easy,
I feel it every day,
Missing you is harder
It will never go away.

I want to see your face,
Smell your scent, so fair
I want to hold you close
Run fingers through your,hair.

I look upon your picture,
Cry rivers that your gone,
I look upon our children
The image of you..Our Son

My mistake was to leave you,
But your jealousy.. I blamed,
I was ten years younger.
My energy could not be,tamed

If only i could turn back,
The ticking hands of, time
I would do it all so different
Huge mountains we could,climb

It has been so hard, without you,
Raising our children all, alone.
I hope your looking down on them,
Proud of how they`ve grown.

I will never stop loving you 
My Soulmate up above.
Your always in my heart..
You were my first.. True love.... 

 

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Larry Ran

Hi Debs,

A beautiful love story.  Written from the heart, illustrated by your soul.  My wife and I both had tears as we came to its end.  To say more would be superfluous! 

Peace and Love,

xox Larry

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Larry Ran

Hi Debs,

Your poem just inspired me to write a love haiku.  I actually plagiarized myself from the comment I made to you, "written from the heart, illustrated by the soul".  But of course, if one plagiarizes themselves it is a literary legality.

Peace and Love,

xox Larry

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Deborah Evans

HI  Larry .... Glad you and and your wife enjoyed this one 
it was, written from my heart, Hey Larry you always write nice words
i read you Haiku its lovely,... Love and Hugs Both.. Debs xox

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Bradford

Hey debs my ex was 10 years younger than me but we butted heads alot not much in the way of jealousy. We never saw eye to on everyday life which brought on sadness and great strife . I understand where you are coming from and sorry for your loss . This world throws us curve balls sometimes not knowing what to think or do . I do believe love and God keep me going on a daily basis . Very beautiful write . I enjoy reading your work.love is still out there for everyone, sometimes it takes longer to find it than others . Keep up the great work hugs to you rock 

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Deborah Evans

Hi Rock.... Thanks for your comments and kind words
But for my ex being ​​​​​​very jealous everything else was 
good, after we divorced we were the best of friends always
which was so good for our children too, I have regrets that maybe
i should have tried harder, but i was young, we all think more
with hindsight,i believe like you there is love out there for every
one, I`m quite content on my own but i am open to love
happening once  more,...Glad you enjoy my work hugs Debs 

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Niçois King

I thought I could write but boy this is great!!!!!

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Deborah Evans

Aww Thanks Nicois  A lovely comment ... Debs :-)
 

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