True love sings beyond the sea
I left the sea to find my dream.
The streams outside the sea
sings the name Hakeem.
My imagination travels
above the sea, seeking my dream.
The great storm of wisdom pulled me down.
Are you sure your dream is above the sea?
There will be many sacrifices above the sea
The world above will not be like home.
Are you sure your dream is above the sea?
I raise my windowβ¦a sweat aroma flows,
from the seaβ¦I hear a song, it sings Adriana
My imagination travels outside my window
Seeking my dream⦠just beyond the sea.
The great wisdom of my grandma speaks to me
son; are you sure your dream is just beyond the sea?
There will be many sacrifices beyond the sea.
The world beyond the sea will not be like home.
Are you sure your dream is just beyond the sea?
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I love this line and the structure of the poem!Β Intriguing write...thank you for sharing!
Val β₯οΈ
Thank you Val....I enjoy the comments...They are encouraging, for this beginner.
This was interesting, a show of curiosity and restraint. I myself struggle with this concept a lot as I'm positive many do. Great structure and consistency 5* :)
Love, CO
Thank you CO...Good to have you as a follower.