Poem -
Truth Wears Duct-tape
People shudder at the truth
They hide behind
Their walls and fortresses
Feasting on the bitter fruits
Of illusion, making love to deceitĀ
So its natural that when I speak
I too must be silenced
One day the world shall pay
For the sin
In making
Truth wear duct-tape
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Powerful...
WOW!
AWESOME...
sparrowsong
Thanks a bunch Sparrowsong, you have my appreciation :)
CO
You have my appreciation too...
sparrowsong
Hey Curious!!.........this has a lovely flow to the metering you've created here..........read this aloud to my room-mate........and we both agreed, this reads like a dream (not literally of course).........well done my friend............love this subject matter too......the truth has a way of finding it's way to the surface of matters............love and rockets!!.........T xo
Hey Tony, I'm glad you appreciated this piece, truth is like putting a plastic cup deep in the ocean, eventually it'll float to the surface
CO
The question is what kind of dream does it read like?...I'll contemplate
Wow...powerful words and picture my friend....one can almost feel the "slap" Ā of awakening.....to "love's deceit..
"truth wear duct tape" Ā silence is shown in a whole new light :)
Awesome write Angel..
Keep smiling ;)
Giggles the Poet
Ā
Hi Brenda, I'm glad you stopped by and thanks a bunch I appreciate your feedback, much love
Curious