Poem - 10 January 2014, 12:51 Contest Nominees Trying Susan O'Reilly I’m not afraid of dying in fact I’m actively trying I won’t go quietly I want you to shoot me Like 0 Pin it 0 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 1371 Rating: Total votes: 2 Poetry Genre: Verse Lyric Listed in: Contest Entries 6 comments
Stephen Weyant10 January 2014, 13:33 I sure hope youre speaking of someone else! we would miss you!!! whats the picture you chose? I wish you the best! Reply
Susan O'Reilly10 January 2014, 13:48 ah thanks Stephen u might but not for long its Bonnie & Clyde x Reply
Stephen Weyant10 January 2014, 13:59 time is heartless for sure! however, you have shared parts of your soul! that is unable to be relinquished! Connected you convey keen cognition creating clarity now a fragment of you is me a haiku for you! Reply
Jai Masters11 January 2014, 00:37 it's the last line that kills it off so well, This lady knows a thing or two about crime and punishment about the tragedy to come liked!! Reply
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I sure hope youre speaking of someone else!
we would miss you!!!
whats the picture you chose?
I wish you the best!
ah thanks Stephen u might but not for long its Bonnie & Clyde x
time is heartless for sure!
however, you have shared parts of your soul! that is unable to be relinquished!
Connected
you convey keen cognition
creating clarity
now a fragment of you is me
a haiku for you!
very nice put it up and thank you your very kind x
Powerful, especially with the image attached!
it's the last line thatÂ
kills it off so well,Â
This lady knows a thing or twoÂ
about crime and punishmentÂ
about the tragedy to comeÂ
liked!!Â