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RG

Way to kill the Haiku game Jim, few words , with a great message.Β 

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Marion

Wise words Jim...x

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Jill Tait

Yup very wise man β€οΈπŸ’•β€οΈ

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Shaun Cronick

Jim you certainly hit the moral nail on it's moral head with your moral hammer with this one.
Short and sweet and a perfect 5,7,5 haiku just for good measure.
Nicely done and more importantly more than nicely in its message.
Stay healthy and I wish you well my friend and not forgetting thank you.

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Jim "The Lad" ....

hope I show mercy as much as morality Shaun! thank you so much! all the best!

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Neville

These are never easy and those that convey a moral message that actually means something are rarer and more priceless than rocking horse droppings and unicorn tears combined .. this is a fine example of such a hard to find haiku .. NevilleΒ 

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