Turning Time
Can we turn back time to that rainy day?
When the bus broke and the sky was pouring down.
And my father was held up, so I waited with the crowd.Β
This day filled with misery and failure!
The day I saw you for the first time.Β
Something about seeing you felt important somehow.Β
You just walked by, and caught my eye.Β
Can we turn back time to that rainy day?
Make me look the other way.Β
Or my father hurry or not let the bus break.Β
Anything to change events of that day.Β
If you hadnβt caught my eye that day,
Perhaps I wouldnβt love you this way.Β
All it took was one look. And Iβll never be the same.Β
So much pain could have been spared, so much joy unfelt;
If I hadnβt looked that way...
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Hey Whispering Dream!!....I have several poems on 'time'....ALL of which, just as yours does, have a Salvador Dali painting representing the write!!.....I love DALI ~ so happy you chose this picture!!.... He has en entire series of 'Melting Clock" paintings!!.... anyway, this subject matter is something close to my heart and the spirit of me...... you did a stellar job here!!......" All it took was one look..".....ALL STARS!!..... compelling stuff dear poet sister!!.....LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo ?β³β΄β₯β???
Ps.Β Love that song!!Β ?
Thank you so much! I really appreciate it β₯οΈβ₯οΈ
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gorgeous pen, I just reposted two time related poems. Time is inspiring. your ink is lovely
Thank you very much, Iβll have a read soon. β₯οΈβ₯οΈ
Very nice poem
Love it
Thank youβ₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈ
We all look at the past,especially if you are older,but no point in dwelling.
Anyway enjoyed your poem.?
Thank you! So happy you stopped by ?