Poem -
Tweeners
Tweeners.
Current
state
of things.
Still ruled
by baser
instincts.
Genetically
coded
instincts.
Animal buried
deep inside.
Survival
of the
fittest.
Intelligence.
Budding
intelligence.
Moving through
past the beast.
Toward reason
away from
animal.
Animal
passion.
Stuck
between.
Monkey
in the
middle.
Tweeners.
Dealing with
the animal
moving
toward the
thoughtful.
Tough passage.
Pushing,
pulling.
Moving
toward with
fits and starts.
Tough passage.
Much rides
on the
outcome.
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Comments
Nice John, evolution and where will we end up I wonder. Maybe we will download our consciousness into androids. Like the use of Data here. I loved Star Trek growing up :)
Thanks Gwen,
One wonders once dispassionate strong A.I. arrives what will it make of us hormone drenched flying off the wall humans. JP
Indeed John, it is quite daunting really. Have you seen Sophia ? She is the world's first AI humanoid android, who learns and does talks. She was given citizenship in one country. It's going to happen. Eek
Cool stuff JP!!...and VERY accurately conveyed.....I definitely felt accentuation of the push and pull of being that age......hormones raging,....struggle against authority.....all of that well delivered!!......./ALL STARS!!......ever the pleasure dear poet brother!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo : )
Hi Tony,
thank you kindly for reading my work.
JP