Poem -
Twin Flame
You are the yin to my yang.
My other half, my lover, my twin flame.
Spirit took one soul and split it in two.
He came up with perfection me and you.
You are the dark to my light,
and I am the day to your night.
Opposites we are it's true,
but no one am I closest to than you.
You are me and I am you
Together there's nothing we can't do.
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Very good ideas on a relationship between two differing souls who find a common thread to their existence. YouΒ must promote distinctly what you want to put across to the reader throughout your piece not becoming sidetracked by detail. This piece is clear and unambiguous making it stronger !
Nice work. Β :)
Best wishes !
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Natalie
You write very well. You have to clarify the theme of your poem before starting and stick to a framework which best puts across that theme.
Love your focus and approach to writing.
Take care. Β :)