Poem -
Twisted
Went in to look at art
there you were sitting there
With your biggest anchor point
From South America
You looked directly into my eyesΒ
You dont see anything about yourself
No responsibilityΒ
and only care about yourself
Spoiled: it was how you were raisedΒ
twisted twisted
Starting a fight with me on my birthday
I still cant get over that
Over a unreal subject
But your daughter was coming back
it was staged..
twisted twisted
And
You took my strongest virtueΒ
Fidelty and loyality
and twisted it
It did not have to be like that..
I wanted only you until I departed this planet
YOU COULD NOT SEE THAT!!!
now its allΒ twisted twisted..................
(I know you come here to read)
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Wow!!.... powerful message!!....... not sure who it's for....... but I think it makes its point quite well........twΔ«sted!!..smiles!!........stay cool brother poet!!........ LOVE and ROCKETS!!........T xo.Β Β ?
Tony-Thank you---- not really a true poem...when you run into someone you were close to (like I did yesterday);;;; and that person tore it all up so she dose not look bad to others...after talking bad about you to many many many others (when together)... it all should of keptΒ between the two people ... its gross ...
Β When someone is worried about things that are not real its sick....public relations should not be a factor in love...if you love the person it doesnt matter what your father thinks or friends think you know etc etc etcΒ
So sorry to hear of this bro!!.... you know how people say there's a lesson to be learned?......I disagree with that statement intellectually........I think that the energy exchanged during the immediacy of the encounter itself can be changed to a positive energy for your personal belief system through forgiveness .......that crazy energy can be turned into something VERY cool bro!!..... hey ~ just my opinion!!........ stay cool my friend!!...... you live ~ you die!!....... and in between better learn some cool shit to greet your death with!!........ smiles........T xo.Β ?
Tony-great comment you are correct ...thanks for the reminder DAMN Β I know this thanks sometimes let dark-side bother me..
Mark you stated your ideals eloquently in this piece. it take a talented man to express in poetry how it is.
XX Lisa
Lisa jeeeez thank you so much...I have to catch here was gone awhile