Poem -
Twisted Thought's
TWISTED THOUGHT’S
Through the night, she walked along the street wondering
what next? punishing herself for all the conflict that she had passed unjustified .
She looked like a
tangled vine, Imbedded with sweet and sour drops of wine, slowly dripping across her face.
A cluster of granules, attached into her inner conscious that would not leave her existence, excruciating tormenting her.
Trying to blow away, every bit of dust, and clutter in between her thoughts, as destiny had a plan of its own only waiting to reveal itself.
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Comments
Maria this is really well written, fresh, flowing with a certain style that this ready likes to read....you don`t remind me of anyone, and I mean that as a compliment...lots of good flavour in this poetic stew...impressive
I enjoy this Maria interesting write.
I thank you for your Comments and I appreciated :)
Hey Maria!!.........a twisted stew indeed.......... with some memorable phrasing......... "Punishing herself for all the conflict that she had passed unjustified.."...... it was a compelling read for sure.......... Love your ink sister girl!!............. smiles...........T xo
Thank you, Tony, for your Comments, I appreciate every one.
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Hi Maria, nice piece has a sorrowful joy to it
The unknown unveiling,
Almost like ancient Indian poetry, well done
Much love nardine xo.
Thank you Nadine for your comment xo
Hey Maria I wonderful write of torment and lingering thoughts in her head .very well said all stars from rock
Thank you for your comments I appreciated.
That's interesting! What was your position in the U S gov if I may ask?