Poem -
TWISTED WORLD
Some can look at the World and say All Is Well...
Some can look at the World and say what happened?
If everything was good in the World how long would it take to learn people's truth?
A lot longer than we would know...
If the World wasn't Twisted...
Please keep it Twisted...
It really does help to learn the truth...
sparrowsong
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wow an amazing poem i can only wish one day my poetry reaches the standard you display
Hello Janie...
That is very kind...
Remember right now...
You're 18...
I'm not a one woman show...
I owe my Thanks to God and the the Team of my supporters and the help from a
all the talented out there...
I like to think there's a lot of good and true hearts behind it all...
That wouldn't be reality...
People can disappoint real deep if you let them...
Keeping On Keeping On and releasing what isn't going to help you grow that can be really hard for people...
People can be fake...
Remember the truth always comes out and hopefully, not after you give them your heart...
If I had your brain and talent all my life and we know it takes heart too...
I hope I'm still alive to watch where your amazingness takes you...
Be true to yourself...
Know you deserve the best for you and give it back double...
Thank you for your again for your kind comment and support...
sparrowsong
An excellent subject and just as it takes all types to make a world, we all have individual vision and opinions, so one may see the world that is broken, another can see with positive eyes. That's the nature of humanity, we have influencers now, but years ago much of what we believed and saw actually came from music. 🌹
Hello Shirley...
I agree with that...
Correct me if I'm wrong with us being from different parts of the World...
We may have shared some of the same Music?
I didn't listen to a lot of the same Music my friends did...
If I did...
Oh boy!
I will just say that wouldn't have been good for me...
I listened to the Musicians who were Storytellers mostly...
I made a self challenge when I was able to make time to really listen...
To this day I am at 89% Accuracy...
There's Answer Sheets now when I feel the need to check my answer...
It's not completed yet...
I had Sunday School which many of us did and my peers and I were born in a Very Patriotic Era here...
We Pledge Allegiance to the Flag everyday...
I was the only one in my circle of friends who had family members that were Military...
I was the only kid I knew who had a Godfather who was Chief of Police...
A Couple of my Cousins received it by default...
The rest of us were True Blue...
Thank you for your kind comment and support...
sparrowsong
Hello Bernie...
Glad you enjoyed!
There's different Tribes I know...
Whenever, I get into someone's presence the greeting I get is as if they're not separate at all...
They have to tell me their Tribe...
The connection is one...
I only have a bit in me...
I only met one that was nice and grumpy depended on her mood...
Her prejudice would come out on her grumpy moments...
It usually came from a past memory she would go to and it would take her time to snap back to reality and remember I hadn't been born yet...
The other times she was as sweet as pie...
Thank you for your kind comment and support...
sparrowsong
Hi S, so many comments here all highly rating your work and I am one of them hugs x