Bravo dear poet brother....Bravo!!......Love this absolutely beautiful expression!!.....PINNED for pure, succinct, observant, loveliness!!......Like M said....the final line is genius!!.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )
Autumn sweeps in like a queen with a beautifully hued cloak. The trees change the colour of their leaves in honour of her visit. The Queen is here, the wheel has turned another notch. A beautifully written poem dear friend x
Your review note is a poem in its very own write & I truly thank you for leaving it here & entrusting me with it Tina :) ............................................................ Neville x
Neville, it would seem you are a guru of the short power punching poem. I can only echo what has already been said. You reach that last line and it really hits you. A poem that impacts the reader and leaves them in awe of your skills with a pen. Perfect poetry right here x
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Now...it is the last line here that really makes this poem...genius as always x
Blimey, I am absolutely made up Marion, thank you my friend ... Neville x
You're welcome x
Bravo dear poet brother....Bravo!!......Love this absolutely beautiful expression!!.....PINNED for pure, succinct, observant, loveliness!!......Like M said....the final line is genius!!.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )
and like I said to M .. I am absolutely made up Mate, thank you my friend :)
Autumn sweeps in like a queen with a beautifully hued cloak. The trees change the colour of their leaves in honour of her visit. The Queen is here, the wheel has turned another notch. A beautifully written poem dear friend x
Your review note is a poem in its very own write & I truly thank you for leaving it here & entrusting me with it Tina :) ............................................................ Neville x
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Neville, it would seem you are a guru of the short power punching poem. I can only echo what has already been said. You reach that last line and it really hits you. A poem that impacts the reader and leaves them in awe of your skills with a pen. Perfect poetry right here x
and you ma'am are far too kind by half & that's an understatement in my book x