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Umbilical Tears (DBlankPortraits Brevity Challenge)

Umbilical Tears (DBlankPortraits Brevity Challenge)

      “The unmourned demise of
        nurturing cords,
         Refused by her higher self
          virtually, 
           Detoured as gothic  
            tears,
             Post stigmatic
             surrogacy
              conveyance.” 

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Charu Shaawd

Thank u Dear Nigel 
much appreciated xx

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Charu Shaawd

So are you Dear Bro
we are all uniquely awesome in our own beautiful ways. 
Ty
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Giggles the Poet

Hello Angel beautiful and touching words very deep gives the reader something to think about
 keep the writing it’s great for the soul 

Love and hugs GIGGLES the Poet

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Charu Shaawd

Thank u dear sis for your time to read this n comment 
god bless u 

much love ? ?

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sparrowsong

Hello Charu...

I noticed you melt a brain...

Two counts of Excellence!

Great write!

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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Charu Shaawd

Thank u very much love
your words mean a lot xx
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S.zaynab.kamoonpury

Wow sublime abstract poetry for me here. Great in brevity. Could you explain it or maybe u don't want to. Kudos.

im quite a newbie here, but have been writing and interacting with poets for what seems ages. Pleez do write your thoughts/review/comment under my newest poem too. 

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Charu Shaawd

Hello
Welcome to My page dear ?

sure i will visit urs xx

Thank u for stopping by and giving yourinput ?much appreciated 

my intent behind this one was to illustrate in limited wrds( as per contest guidelines)  the unexplainable pain of a surrogate mom after she delivers a baby she can never own.
nurturing cords refers to umbilical cord via which the baby gets nourishment 
Because this mum’s  ( but not mum) higher self does not seem to accept this fact , ( as our higher self never deceives or lies) ,,the hidden pain of this disconnection from d bebe leads to gloomy tears from the eyes of the surrogate mum.
the black in the image i hv related to the gloominess n pain 
the white i hv related to motherhood
the mask related to silence N hidden emotions 
the title Umbilical tears was inspired by the hanging rope like thingy from d eyes of the figure in image which can b related to umbilica ?

hope this helps xx

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Charu Shaawd

Thank u , means a lot 
ru keen on partaking ?? 
Cant wait to see ur expression.

ty xx

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S.zaynab.kamoonpury

Pressed for time but I will try my best to. Thanxxx for the reminder pal. It is our Eid festivities  tomorrow so perhaps after it?

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lodigiana

Sometimes words are not quite enough..this is simply AWESOME! xxxx

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Larry Ran

Dear Charu,

You have created a masterpiece.  You do not need to read other's poetry to learn.  You already are a gifted genius.

The tears of the carrier
With the gift that she brings
The donor is weeping
The donee e'er sings

Love,
Larry xxx

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Charu Shaawd

Thank u Larry
your encouraging words mean a lot

Your way of commenting is so graceful ? thnks a lot 

much love xx

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Wayne Stubbs

???? what an exceptional piece of poetry!! ????? 

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Charu Shaawd

Thank u thank u ☺️
Heartfelt gratitude my friend 

much love 
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