Poem -
~unavoidably green~.
My hair & my stomach
Everything in-between
T'was the whiskey lullaby
That crept into my head
T'was the darkness
That slept within my bed
Covering my skin
Within soft layers of sin
The song playing
Notes I've felt before
T'was the memories
Haunting
That came tapping
On my chamber door
I kissed midnight
Upon the face
T'was an entrance
another time & space
Unavoidably green
My lips now ~ unclean
T'was the whiskey lullaby
That crept into my head
T'was the darkness
That slept within my bed
Unavoidably green
T'was A Nightmare
Haunting~
~jaunting
T'was not A dream.
Nardine Sanderson 07/03/2015.
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Hey Big Sis!!......I LOVE the way you incorporated the repetition of 'Twas and the very cool reference to Edgar Allen Poe!!..........helped with the over-all flow..........crap sister girl!!.....you are just getting better with every write.............smokin' grooves Deano!!............love and rockets!!...........T xx
Haha thanks bro, i actually am green today, hair and stomach, to much whiskey last night
thought it would make a cool write, glad you like it love and rockets back at ya sweetie pie, love ya bro, nardine xoxo
Hi Nardine,
Unavoidably read, great write, new style, I love it, my applause, my vote
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thanks heaps brother willy for your compliments:) much appreciated as always
love and hugs nardine xoxo
Liking this one a lot, nardine, the rhythm reminded of 'The Raven' here and there, possibly my favorite all time poem from my def. second favorite all time poet Mr. Poe; but Frost is the man....nardine you're a dynamo incorporating different elements styles, having a keen eye, and staying fresh.....enjoyed
~~T'was the memories
Haunting
That came tapping
On my chamber door
I kissed midnight
Upon the face
Aww thanks heaps Chris, you say the nicest thing's
i love Edgar Allan Poe too, funny enough i didn't even see it till now
in this one, purely by accident, but I'm surprising happy about it :)
love and hugs nardine xoxo