Uncornered Walls

Emptiness of a stubborn ceaseless
Dripping faucet through the night;
Rattling of a tin of leftover candies
Rolling beat down a mossy slope;
Silent sinking of a leadened chest
Spiralling full down a dark abyss;
Noisy chaos of a terminal in limbo
Alive with breaths but dead of life;
Awake shut eyes straining for restĀ
Incoherent mind yearning for quiet.
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Hey SAMBIT!!.....LOVE this!!....the abstract nature of this...pushed forward by VERY original phrasing.......and topped off with ~ "Incoherent mind yearning for quiet..".......the whole thing creates a subtly charged ambiance.......well conceived & delivered with a "VERY UNIQUE" and original phrasing.......HEY!! ~ that's what "poetic license" is all about!!.......ALL STARS......well done......and.......WELCOME to COSMO!!.........T xo
Shukriya Tony!
That's really generous of you. I truly appreciate your insights and time. :)