Undeniably Piqued
these are more than just words, but I shall let them speak for themselves ..
she was both sulky and shy ..
like the top of
some remote and obscured
by cloud
high mountain peak shy ..
allowing nothing
but brief glimpses at first ..
and so hard
to reach, but all the effort
they said in
the end, would be worth it ..
it was a shame
though, when afterwards ..
she refused to
let go and spoilt everything ..
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awsome poem
I really can't thank you enough Greg .. But I sure as hell do sir :)
A cool and clever write throughout and wondered after reading where you were taking a reader Nev.
Then reread and it suddenly dawned on me- Your play on words and title then set me straight.
And hats off to you for writing a touch of class with original thinking and such an apt and smart title as well :)