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Undeniably Piqued

these are more than just words, but I shall let them speak for themselves ..

                                                                                 she was both sulky and shy ..
                                                                                             like the top of
                                                                                 some remote and obscured
                                                                                                  by cloud
                                                                                    high mountain peak shy ..
                                                                                            allowing nothing
                                                                                   but brief glimpses at first ..
                                                                                               and so hard
                                                                                   to reach, but all the effort
                                                                                               they said in
                                                                                  the end, would be worth it ..
                                                                                             it was a shame
                                                                                  though, when afterwards ..
                                                                                              she refused to
                                                                                  let go and spoilt everything ..

 

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Neville

I really can't thank you enough Greg .. But I sure as hell do sir  :) 

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Shaun Cronick

A cool and clever write throughout and wondered after reading where you were taking a reader Nev.
Then reread and it suddenly dawned on me- Your play on words and title then set me straight.
And hats off to you for writing a touch of class with original thinking and such an apt and smart title as well :) 
 

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