Poem -
Snake pit
Dynamic, steely eyed go getter,
Jet setter,
Manager in the making.
Vastly obtuse,Β
Clinical in berating.
Pinocchio,
Orchestrated for effect,
Walks the barren planes,
Ambitions erect.
Gargantuan in ego,
Built with a silver tongue,
Non frivolous,
Pretentious,
Blunder to asunder,
Quick to report a wrong.
Inquisitive of your motives,
Charm of a Boa in season.
Pampered lifestyle and iron wallet,
He'll gift you to the hounds,
Just give him a reason.Β
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Comments
Great writing, Simon. You are really talented.Β
(sounds like some of the people I work with).Β
Enjoyed that greatly.Β
Matthew.Β
Thank you very much ?
Simon the picture definitely isn't a boa...I am afraid of snakes but I can't help admiring them. I love your way with words. Stellar read!
Thank you Lisa.Β Picture changed lol thanks and much appreciated ?
You didn't have to change it lol was just an observationΒ
Lol i like everything to be just so! So thank you for your critique.
I like how you said it in a respectful way with out giving off negative energy ( like I did in bad naboir) Iβm acually contemplating taking it down cuz I donβt support bad energy .Β
Any way loved this great job?
Thank you Edward.Β I know what you mean, I have deleted stuff in the past for lack of response or at the time It just didn't feel right, however I also feel that poetry is whatever is in our thoughts and feelings in the moment and to erase that would be to deny ourselves.