Poem -
Unfortunate love
It's pretend, no feelings.. He doesn't believe i exist... He doesn't know i care, he plays me like a violin... But i can't resist.. He makes my heart skip a beat, i wish he didn't exist. The feelings grow stronger, as his get weaker... My hopes are brought up, but then sadly crushed, it's a love rush... He gives me a reason to smile, he gives me a reason to cry.. I just can't figure out whats right...
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Unfortunately Miss Janas..........we must all face the truth of unrequited Love (most of us).........which you have so beautifully conveyed in this piece.............it is a fine debut piece here.........I enjoyed it my friend.........VERY compelling..........and Welcome to COSMO sweet poetess..........well done..........smiles.........T xx
Hi Joanna! Welcome to Cosmo!! An excellent write about the conflicting emotions a person experiences during relationships...a very relatable subject. I really enjoyed reading this one...5*s!
Val ♥
Simple and cute write, my applause, my vote
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI