Poem -
Unravelling
I am unravelling
Like a flower
Layering petals
Of my unique abilities
Listening to the scent
Of my inner voice
Feeling the softness
Of my emotions
Tasting the nectar
Of my creativity
Flourishing in the depths
Of my surroundings
Pratibha Savani Feb 2021
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Comments
Soo beautifully hand crafted Hunnybun & pinned ❤️⭐️❤️
Hi Jill! You are so kind. Thank you so much, it got you to push the button for a pin!! Much love Px
Awwww ❤️💕❤️
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Very nice. Great understanding of what we can be...
Thank you John. So pleased you found it delightful. Px
Beautifully worded. I thought at first this was going to be a sad one when I read the first line, "I am unravelling..." but thank goodness all is okay. Lovely little poem Pratibha x
Hi Tina! Thank you for reading! Always value your comments as well! Yea I'll stick to uplifting writes, there is enough sad ones on here!! Glad you liked it. Px
i loved this poem it
was so wonderful
Thank you so much Greg for the wonderful pin! You are always on it on here and I really value you taking time to read my writes. Px
You’re so welcome I always will read your poems They’re always so wonderful
Oh wow thank you Greg such a lovely compliment 😁 i tend to keep them short too. thank you again x
Lovley sentiment and very creatively written
lorna x
Hi Lorna. Thank you for reading and I'm glad you liked. It's kinda become my style of laying it out now. Px
Hi P,
Very good - I hope that you
don't unravel too much!
Love,
Terry.
xoxo
Hi T! No of course not! Just need enough for more creative writes 😁
Thanks for liking this. Px
Most excellent work here PRATIBHA!! ~
~ "Tasting the nectar of my creativity...."
Fantabulous wordplay dear poet sister!!......Love it!!.......Smiles!!.......T xo : )
Thank you Tony. Really appreciate the positive feedback. That line just came to me. Thanks for recognising it and for the fabulous pin! Px
Pratibha,
Your poetry gets better and better! Beautifully elegant. Such a poignant poem x
Thanks for sharing xxxx
Thank Sarfraz. Kept it short and sweet! Thanks for the wonderful pin! Px
Lovely creativity and message!..........................Jim
Aaahhh thank you Jim! Most appreciative. Px
Wonderfully worded and beautifully thought up and presented,
a real poetic joy to read and you are unravelling for all the right poetic reasons.
Thanks for writing and sharing your short and sweet poem Pratibha, where less is most certainly more, for all to happily view.
Five stars and quickly pinned too.
And thanks again.
Thank you Shaun for another pin and taking time to read it. I really appreciate your support and comments. There are so many talented poets on here so I just find it so fascinating to read others too.
Yes my poems are usually short. I just dont seem to write long ones. I also feel that simple is always the best too.
Good day! Enjoy the sun. Px
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Thanks Marion 💜
Ooh this is scrumptious to read. I love how you have formatted this poem. It’s beautiful. Every word dances off the tongue. Perfectly crafted, a real gem
Gwen 💛x
Hi Gwen what a delight to see your comment. Thank you and for the wonderful pin! I really appreciate that you liked my poem, structure and layout. As an artist I do appreciate any feedback.
I havent been on here much but I know I'll be reading yours when Ido xxx. Have a great day!
and I see that I had joined cosmo a month after you!!
Px