UNRESOLVED HURTS (Wordsworthian Sonnet)

In the dark my need for you accuses me ruthlessly.
With full intent is peels back my skin to speak
My consent to submit to your charm and mystique
As you entice me into the void presumably
Wanting my vow to love you without scrutiny.
Again you take me further into the dark abyss
Lonely, I hunger for your drugging kiss.
You think this dark prison prevents my mutiny?
I will not live within your subtle lies
Nor allow your caress to thwart my resolve!
I won’t subscribe to your philosophies
Or succumb to your demand and absolve
You only to return to the anomalies
Of an affair marred by hurts we can’t dissolve.
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hello valerie
powerful piece! such strength is expressed amidst suffering.
love the line "my need for you accuses me ruthlessly"
I wish you the best!!!
thanks for sharing
Stephen! Â Thanks so much for your wonderful commentary on this poem. Â I really appreciate your thoughts.Â
val
'With full intent it peels back my skin to speak'
Such beautifully gruesome imagery! This is a fantastic poem!Â
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Hi Jenni!  Thanks so for your comments…they are much appreciated!!!
val