Poem -
untamed melody...
unchangeable, untameable and unhinged
no one can hold me; nothing can harm me
this lonely melody will remain in my mind
and in my heart;
my hungry heart that’s about to burst
escaped my metal cage I have felt the rain
drench me, shower me, mix with my tears
I’m like a puzzle but all of my pieces are jagged; if you can understand this, we can make some magic…I’m wrong like that…
my only wish was to forget those old fears
even now, they find me, and I look away; fly
let me fly, let me drive, let me go now
only hold on if you’re willing to ride along
don’t blame me, I don’t want to go back
you’ll only tame me, and I don’t want to be tamed
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Beautiful wild and and free... stay a free spirit if it makes you happy... one day you may meet the one then you'll either settle or the one will go along for the ride... stay free, you were born that way!
Thanks so much Roger!! hahaha and if they're on a ride of their own too then I won't mind either; but if we're not going anywhere then...XD You're absolutely right, we are all born free and because of that, we're also never alone. We're free together!!!
Thanks for the like and stars!! *****
zZz
I agree wholeheartedly with Roger!!...... Absolutely BEAUTIFUL flowing piece of poetic prose that sings of an "Untamed Melody" ......taking the reader away into its call for 'Freedom of Spirit" ~
~ "I have felt the rain drench me, shower me,
Mix with my tears,
My only wish was to forget
Those old fears...."
You have found a gorgeous voicing for this piece.....I look forward to hearing from it/you again soon.......ALL STARS!! & PINNED!!...... excellent work my friend!!........LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo ?❤??
Thanks so much for stopping by Tony!!! Just taking the passion of the moment to formulate a longer lasting memory hahaha. The feeling may fade but the written word can be copy-pasted and saved file for...a bit longer. hahaha
Thanks for the like and stars and THE PIN!! *****
You're the best!!
zZz
Have you " escaped a cage " to find, another ? The heart's yearning can metamorphosize so much it returns to, " whence , it came " i.e the fundamental foundations of " mature " LOVING BONDS. :)
This means " sexual " dynamics, associated with commitment, over time, to one soul. Whose heart is inextricably linked to the " fate " of yours. !! The crux, of the matter, lies in the establishment of the long-term productive statement of " STANDARD PRACTICE " !!!.....whatever that is, and wherever, that may happen. :)
" IN THE LIGHT OF THAT, SILVERY MOON ", is found answers to " age-old " questions, evolving the initial " greet " to meet required, as well as acquired, " tastes " !!! The hybrid blend of intoxicating romances and " savours " lifts the spirit !!! :) :)
POETRY SAYS IT ALL. It explains the " loving mix " which is beautifully " crafted " from experience....and expertise. ON ALL LEVELS. :) Is that not, so ? Charming displays of " affection " REINFORCES the escalating pressure to say " home ", never separating the soul from a " hostage " situation !!!
ARE YOU, A " WILLING CAPTIVE " ? Of choice design, breeding hope and joy, to " mask " fantasy...and expectations !! :)
XXX
I have escaped a cage to find another...another love...but not another love from a person; not a love that we've grown accustomed to and think we need...not a love from any person but a more personal love, maybe even a higher love if I have the endurance; and I know I won't find it, stuck in a cage...
zZz
Only just come across this...beautiful writing and well done for winning. I'm also struck by your words above to Richard Waters, what you have written really resonated with me because I am at exactly that point in my life. IV always felt trapped and hemmed in by relationships, love ...not free to be my true self and I too am on a journey towards something more spiritual..or something anyway...I will let you know if I find it...??
Thanks so much for stopping by Marion and for your kind words. It gladdens me yet saddens me when people relate to my stories...I think "you too? ...oh no, not you too...we can't all be like this..." ??? Well I hope we find what we're looking for, truly, and half the work is actively searching for it right??? We will not stay trapped forever! Never! Run, drive, leap, fly!!! Hahaha. Definitely keep me posted on your journeyful search Marion and so shall I!! ??
zZz
Deal ?
Beautiful writing. Congratulations. Zz.
Thanks so much Rebecca! Always trying on my end...???
zZz
i like this
thanks Jasmine!!
Hey,
I love your detailed emotions of wanting to be free. Beautiful stuff.
Have a positive & beautiful day ????
Georgia
Thanks for stopping by and for your kind and positive words Georgia. I wish the same to you as well! Have a lovely day! ?
zZz