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Until the Orchestra Stops Playing

Until the Orchestra Stops Playing

When love was young we barely heard the overture..
So wildly gentle were we in our race to  clasp each other.
Hands tentatively touching, lips barely brushing
in  anticipation of the lyrical composition being composed.
 
As the intermezzo struck up we were learning our steps..
More confident now and each learning to take the lead
Yet remaining in hold we tentatively  negotiate the floor
 and allow the music to enter our souls, dictating  the rhythm
 
The Finale approaching we prepare for a final flourish.
So much behind us- yet  with  the best still to come.
Steps in synch we seamlessly glide  together  always,
astounding onlookers with the skill our love has developed.
 
Too soon the curtains are  trembling for closure,
but the audience rise  demanding an ‘Encore’…
Smiling through eyes brimming with love, we take our place centre stage,
and  will continue our dance  until the orchestra stops playing.

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StevieC

so beautiful Lodigiana and such a simple way of expressing the phases of love! great stuff! xx

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Tony Taylor

Hey LODIGIANA!!.....beautifully chosen words adding an eloquence to the dance itself gives its entirety a graceful foundation to build on.,. and with 'Overture' in the first 'Intermezzo' in the second, Finale in the third, and 'Encore' in the final stanza you create a VERY moving continuity to the whole!!.....PINNED!.....well done dear poet sister...... Bravo!! ♥.......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.....T xo ?✳✴☀♥???

 

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lodigiana

such lovely comments coming from the Man of Music himself - I am honoured kind friend! Thank you so much xxx
Lodigiana

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Larry Ran

My Dear Lodigiana,

The band plays on, in the "Marathon of Life"
Their music we dance to through all the scores
But eventually, the music stops
And we take our final bow

Love,
Larry xxx
 

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lodigiana

Ah Larry  if music be the food of love .....we would want a banquet! Thank you so much I just love  your poem  dear friend !  xxx
Lodigiana 

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