Poem -
Upon a time
Once you moved the light in the sky
To a point where my heart overflowed.
I kept dreams in the glow of your eyes
And curled your mouth up in a smile.
Once life itself took on the night
And the things that crawled fell from
Our iky skins to naw clumsily on the floor
And the monsters then that were
Too aware of us dispersed
And fear in our hearts knew it's place
No more.
Of course back then love was all.
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Comments
First 4 lines for me are exquisite R. What a way to describe that strange otherworldly feeling called love x
Otherworldly? All too worldly, earthly even. The most natural thing in the... Well you get it
Agreed...it's only otherworldly in the very very first new months... after that it can be a shitshow... but even you must remember falling in love or lust...that first time ...otherworldly lol
I'm being literal again, aren't I?
I would give you a million stars in applause for this one, oh Rory, your first stanza is so incredibly special, so too is the rest, you have a romantic streak my friend that is shown upon your sleeve, I am in awe of this one a stunner. 🌹 A thousand ✨
Yeah, that for a comment will help me going. Cheers, mate