Poem -
Upon a time
Once you moved the light in the sky
To a point where my heart overflowed.
Ā I kept dreams in the glow of your eyes
And curled your mouth up in a smile.
Ā
Once life itself took on the night
And the things that crawled fell fromĀ
Our iky skins to naw clumsily on the floor
And the monsters then that were
Ā
Too aware of us dispersed
And fear in our hearts knew it's placeĀ
No more.
Of course back then love was all.
Ā
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Comments
First 4 lines for me are exquisite R. What a way to describe that strange otherworldly feeling called love x
Otherworldly? All too worldly, earthly even. The most natural thing in the... Well you get it
Agreed...it's only otherworldly in the very very first new months... after that it can be a shitshow... but even you must remember falling in love or lust...that first time ...otherworldly lolĀ
I'm being literal again, aren't I?
I would give you a million stars in applause for this one, oh Rory, your first stanza is so incredibly special, so too is the rest, you have a romantic streak my friend that is shown upon your sleeve, I am in awe of this one a stunner. š¹Ā A thousand āØ
Yeah, that for a comment will help me going. Cheers, mate