Poem -
~ Upon The Wings Of Time ~
O, but to breathe the breath
Of the ineffable nature of time
On breezes that sing of paraclete wings
Born to soar on the nature of life
This perfect measurement for rhyme
O, but to breathe the breath
Of the angelic spirit of stratosphere
Upon a linear continuum of constants
Propelling the soul through atmosphere
This gift ideal for removing fear
O, but to enjoy this life
With the palette of a taster of wine
Drinking in the universe from an alien stream
Holding 'Love of God' above all inside
While floating gracefully upon the wings of time
'Tis this I find,
This magic in Life,
I'll cling to it fast,
This most perfect glide...
Tony Taylor
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Β happiness in its purest form to still be In love with time .. tho it ages most all and kills anything alive but still love itβs essence .. wonderful spirit Β great poem tonyΒ
Thank you EDDIE!!...... an interesting take on Love & Time...... much like the intent of my write (smiles)......I DO so appreciate your taking the time to read and comment brother!!..... Peace ~ n ~ Stuff!!.....T xo ?β΄β€
Beautiful write
Thank you SO much TARA!!...... for both reading and Commenting!!....... Hugs ~ n ~ Smiles!!......T xo ?β΄β€
Hi Tony, one thing I love about your writes is that they are always deep...You always have your way with words...Love this! LOVE & ROCKETS!!
Thanx So MUCH ROSE!!.....ALWAYS a pleasure to hear from you my friend!!........ Hugs ~ n ~ Smiles!!......T xo ?β΄β€
Tony, the picture you chose is beautiful, she reminds me of Cherie. I'm wondering though, do you choose the picture first and write what you see? or do look for a picture to suit the words? another stellar write poet brother!
Hi & Thanx DARKLY!!.....a VERY good question !!......I ALWAYS write the poem first and then find a picture to represent what I've written!!......IΒ had fun with this one and felt lucky to find this picture!!.....thanx again!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!..........T xo ?β΄β€
This has beautiful rhythm and flow. Especially the start of the second verse, it progresses. There's great momentum, then the third verse finishes nicely. ''O, but to enjoy this life. With the palette of a taster of wine. Drinking in the universe from an alien stream' is brilliant. A good outlook on life, even the unknown. Great write, Tony!Β
Thank you SO much Sir MICHAEL!!....... what an excellent comment.......I like those particular lines as well........ hope all is well with you and yours......... stay groovy!!.......T xo ?β΄β€
My Dear Tony,
Take me on Thy wings oh Lord
Let me soar to Heavens Gate
For I promise that your creations
Eternally will I sate
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And when my time is ended
Let me lay by Your blessed side
For You are my salvation
My Faith ne'er be denied
Love you Bro,
Larry xxx
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