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Upped sticks and gone 🥲

Upped sticks and gone 🥲

Shes missing you like crazy lying on her sofa all alone

Staring at your old photographs, whilst fiddling on the phone

And shes all at sixes and sevens, like a dog with a bone

Coz you walked out and went away without moan or a groan

So she hasn’t got the foggiest, why you have upped sticks and gone

Was it something that she’d said? Or perhaps what she had done?

And shes wondering how on earth shes gonna ever carry on?

You have broken her heart from the barrel of your gun

But they tell her that time will heal her pain

As it bleeds from her soul like an ink blot stain

Yet it comes and it goes in a wax and a wane

She is made of strong stuff so she will start all over again…

 

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Jim "The Lad" ....

I think many times in our younger years it comes down to just plain fear! we too many times let it rule. Cool write my forever friend!...............................lad

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Jill Tait

Awww Thankx Jim the lad ❤️❤️❤️

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Gwendoline

Hello Jill, 
wow this really caught me. 

”You have broken her heart from the barrel of your gun
But they tell her that time will heal her pain
As it bleeds from her soul like an ink blot stain”

Wow such imagery and fluidity, strong lines that really dish out the rawness of this moment. Wonderfully penned my talented poetic friend 😊❤️👌

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Jill Tait

Awww its all just fabricated fiction tho luv xxxx Thankx Chickadee ❤️❤️❤️

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Gwendoline

Yes but fab fiction my friend, that still brings to the reader that raw feeling in its splendid imagery xx ❤

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Jill Tait

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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