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VALERIE

VALERIE

No one is perfect

But she is perfect for me

She's my everything

*This haiku is dedicated to my love, Valerie Lynn aka Sweet Pea

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WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

Dear Jason Luke,

My Reply in a Haiku,  is a tribute to my Little Sister,

  • " Valerie Lyn "  is a lake;
  • Stranded at the edge of flowing river;
  • A petal of red rose!

She is a red lotus blossomed for you, specially from above;

And you, the boatman to take her to the distant shores of love !

 Regards, Love, and Nomination for your first Haiku poem. Good Luck,

With my prayers to both of you on this " GOOD FRIDAY"

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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Jason Luke

Williamsji,

I find your reply haiku to be another level of comfort for us both. You have always been there for us and I know how much Val admires the poems you write. I am still new to the writing scene but she is teaching me different ways for me to attempt to write. I wrote this one so she would know how much I truly love her and will always be by her side. Thank you for my first nomination! Val will be so proud of me and I owe it to you. Thank you and God Bless!

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WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

Jason Luke,

Valerie Lyn,

There is a dormant poet or poetess inside of each one of us. We have to make some noise to awake the dormant poets, Valerie Lyn is one of the best  poetess in COSMOFUNNEL, I wish you to come forward to the front. We all will support you. We are the children of God, We are One, Keep this good spirit. With prayers and Love to both of you,

Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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Valerie Lynn

Wow Big Wills! You left such an admirable comment above to both of us and the best compliment I have ever received from anyone in regards to my own writing. I cannot thank you enough for your unconditional support for both Jason and I through our individual expression of words. I was ecstatic to see he received a nomination on his first haiku! I am so proud of him and I know it made him extremely happy! He is already writing another one to put on here later. :)  We both want to thank you for the impact you have made in our lives and I know there are so many others out there who look up to you for inspiration as well. I hope you have a wonderful weekend and from Jason and I - God Bless!

Love Always,

Your Little Sis!

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Jimmy Arnold

Hey Jason,

A star is born, is you in this stunning (HAIKU) and one well worth our weight in (Gold)...Your teacher,(Valerie ), is beyond approach in her (Haiku) renderance to this site and you sir, with your first and in such a few but powerful words, have summed up, what love truly means, between two people, who has fought and still are fighting, against many adversities, others would simply have given into.....There' no stronger (Haiku), than the one you have placed on this site, then the one you have opened up to us, your readers, an(Haiku) wrote not simply of words but from the powerful essence, of one big heart to another....(5) isn't enough credit given to this one, this one is precious and priceless.....

Sincerely,

Jim

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Jason Luke

Hello Jim,

Thank you for congratulating me on the nomination. I was extremely surprised to see it was nominated and I know Val loved seeing that! I can tell you this was not easy for me but once she explained it to me the words just came out. I just posted another one that I think might only make sense to us but she encouraged me to put it up anyway. Val definitely has her favorite writers on this website that mean so much to her and I know you are one of them. She has mentioned you and how much of an impact you have made in her life. Thank you for your words of encouragement. From here I will see what else I will be able to write about.

Jason Luke

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Jimmy Arnold

Jason i really appreciate the heartwarming compliment and what is so special about this poem, is that the words you released, in this poem, so passionately still and always will remain in its birth place, (your heart), without skipping a beat.... You are an inspiration, best friend and love of her life and she yours and to us all, you both are two special people in all of our lives....strength and determination, has had, it's dictatorial words, removed from the dictionary and as its replacement, i was quite sure, that i saw the picture, of Jason Luke and Valerie Lynn..You both, are inspirations to us all.....

Take Care my friends, (Jason/Valerie),

Jim  

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WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

Dear Sir Jim Arnold Sir,

I was really thrilled to see, Jason's Haiku posted, I was amazed, initially, then later, when I came to know Valerie is teaching him how to compose poems, I was more delighted to read. Valerie is a much talented Poetess, even during year 2013, her poems were  in my memories. She smiles, when pain creeps in, referring my Haiku of yesterday, I repeat the lines for your attention dear brother.

Red rose - a Haiku poem on Poetess Valerie Lyn

  • Eyes are silent blue lakes;
  • Marooned at the shores of flowing river;
  • Soft thorns of red rose

I am much delighted, at least sometimes, your golden pen pour few comments for us. Wishing you and your family a happy and peaceful Easter,

Happy Easter Day Celebrations to Sir Jim Arnold Sir ( My Brother )  and to his beloved family. This is first Easter after our Mother's departure. My prayers to my beloved dearest  Mother,

Lovingly Your Brother

WILLIAMSJI

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Jimmy Arnold

Williamsji, 

You are an amazing human being and your heart has away of archiving, your hurts, pains and many sorrows that you yourself has silently faced in life, just to make room for the support and compassion for others on this site and in life in general...... Jason and Valerie said, that we would not see the last of him and as always,(a man of his word)... Happy Easter Day Celebrations to Sir Williamsji Sir ( My Brother )  and to your beloved family as well. This is, as you have stated, the first "Easter after our Mother's departure." My prayers to my beloved dearest Mother and yours and i will always set a plate, (every Easter), at my table, for you and yours, and most definitely, for mine......Take Care Sir Williamsji and hope Easter for you, will be a day, for you all to cherish and always want to remember.

Brother and friend,

Jim A.... 

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WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

Sir Arnold, thanks, tears of love from my eyes, Loving Brother as always and in all my ways, Love, Hugs WILLIAMSJI

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Jimmy Arnold

And you as well "Sir"...Many "Dittos" attached...

Sincerity always,

Jimmy

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