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VEILED DESIRE

VEILED DESIRE

A frail caress falls slowly

From her shaking fingers atop

The face on a picture’s image.

She hears his melody playing

Against the window pane;

The melodic trembling

Of serpentine sonatas.

Yet, the fragile glass reflects

Shattered beauty and svelte love

Melting in the warm rain.

Such a sad epitaph

To the surety that was once

Envisioned in her ethereal dreams.

Her possession of him was sovereign

There she held him captive and sated.

Now the rain invites her to accompany

Its lament and mourn its burst of sorrow.

The deep resonance of his voice

In the quiet of a moment’s heartbeat,

Teased her tears to mark the cadence

Of the rain’s downward flow and its lurid

Clawing at the window’s sill before dropping

Helplessly to dead stone and muddied earth

Sullied, pallid and dark with cold silence.

She lies among the rank weeds, lonely

And wretched, taken by a ravenous ache;

Bravely facing the plundering that dawn

Will surely inflict upon her veiled desire

She bares her life to the sun’s reproachful repartee.

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Anthony Lane

Such a sad story of loss. I was interested from the first word to the last. You told the story nicely and the word choices read well. Anthony

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Valerie Beasley...

Hi Anthony….I have rewritten this poem many times.  I'm glad that you like it.  Always appreciate your point of view!

val

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Stephen Weyant

oh Valerie!!!

beautiful lament!!!

"taken by a ravenous ache" how I dread the ache!!! beyond pain, effects go beyond the physiological and wreaks havoc on the physical!

"veiled desire" what a title, what a theme, what an emotional tragedy!!!

im so grateful you shared this!

 

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Valerie Beasley...

Hi Stephen…yes, it is a lamentation.  I'm so glad that you liked this write.  Thank you for your insightful comments!

val

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Ron Chapman

So sad so much grief. Thanks for sharing your words.
 

Did you get a chance to read my piece called 'Emptiness' 

http://cosmofunnel.com/poems/emptiness-27985

Ron

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Valerie Beasley...

Hi Ron…thanks so much for reading this "grief stricken" poem.  Yes, I did read and comment on you "Emptiness" poem.

val

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