Poem -
Venomous Visitor....
It crawled into my fractured thoughts
Silently polluting my environ
It strangled all the affection in me
And left me poisoned and broke
My hands were shaking through the night
As the venom coursed it's way through my mind
Tearing my pulse in to pieces
Severing my heart
Leaving me blind, out of my mind
All the time, I feel like crying
I'm afraid to swat it away
For it is truly my only friend
Except for my long gone sister
My only friend is a venomous visitor.......
Tony Taylor (Chicago)
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Comments
Great write Brother Tony Taylor,
My applause, My love, My vote
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Hi Mr. Maveli, I thank you for taking the time to read this brother........it was surprising.......the reaction to this.........much appreciated my friend........tony xx
Redbacks are my favorite spiders, poisonous but beautiful, great write, raw emotions sweet Tony, love to you nardine xoxo
Hey Nardine, so you're into the red backs eh? What, do you collect or something......interesting (lol)......thanks for reading sister......I know you are always looking out for me......even when it comes to spiders........smiles......tony xx
Who ever has hurt you?!! just send them round to me and I`ll box their ears for them honey. A short but perfect piece honey, well done. Love G xx
Georgie, I didn't know you boxed.......well, well, the secrets out.......this is giving me ideas (lol).........thanx for reading G..........smiles..........t xx
I`m not ashamed to say that there are the odd one or two who regret crossing me!! But you`re safe kidda don`t worry!!! I`m a short arse (scuse the french)!! but I come to the party well armed, a good right hook I`m told!!!! G xx
LOL .....so you're a tough guy eh?........hmmmm..........who KNEW?..(lol)...........I'm never gonna cross you.........I'm vulnerable to a good right hook..........smiles tt.......xx
I give great cuddles to make it better though afterwards!! lol!! xx