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Victorious

Victorious

Take me to the mountains where I am suspended from heaven and earth

Take me to the desert where silence is my only comfort

Take me to the great big blue, where my mirror image is my refuge

Take me to the deepest darkest caves where my echo is my only joy

I will stand victorious in all my battles

I will not give in nor give up

I will put on my armor and take up my sword

I will ride through the night and not grow weary

I wasn’t created to live depressed

 Beaten

   Convicted

     Condemned

        Ashamed

           Judged

              Or unworthy

I was created to be victorious

I will stand before kings and not loose my virtue

I will stand among leaders with confidence and grace

I will stand before men as their leader and remain humble

I will stand before my enemies with pride

Take me into battle so that I can my make a footstool of my enemies

Take me into battle so that I can put my knowledge to the test

Take me into battle against legions and I will be prepared

Take me into battle and by faith alone I will move mountains

I wasn’t created to live half- heartedly

  Unsuccessful

     Afraid

        Discouraged

           Timid

              Mediocre

                  Or pitiful

I was created to be victorious

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Dear Erika Loots,

The below quoted first four lines are superb. This brings out the theme of the poem which is excellent. I love these lines. The image is also good 

Take me to the mountains where I am suspended from heaven and earth ( Mountains are places on God's dwelling, even in Hindu mythology and Christian Bible like " Golgotha" )

Take me to the desert where silence is my only comfort ( Even a desert place seems like a place to survive peacefully ) 

Take me to the great big blue, where my mirror image is my refuge ( Once, born on Earth We are the Citizens as well as the refugees to our own countries, sometimes )

Take me to the deepest darkest caves where my echo is my only joy (You enjoy as what you are, even in your own difficulties )

Thanks for sharing and love for reading you verse

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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Erika Loots

I like your interpretation of my verses, very interesting. Glad you like it and thank you for reading it! 

We all are fighting some kind of battle, so if I inspire people through my work then I am very pleased. 

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piusha singh

Hi Erika,a real inspirational write,I like the way you arranged your sentences,really creative.Hats off to you dear.

cheers

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Erika Loots

Hi Piusha

Thank you so much, glad you liked it :) Thank you for reading it! :) 

Erika xx

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