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Voices

Voices

Here it comes I stayed against the walls, with my ears itching with pain, pass comments, voices and arguments. All this I hear is foreign, people with black faces tend to be all roses, but happen to be thorns with animosity towards me. As I inhale tho good vibe and exhale the poison that attacks my body, I rise against the waters, and preach my dedication. Thoughts running through my head, these people starting to become feds watching my every move, these demons of the past, seem to creep up in a flash.Try to break away from the dark light of these people. Trying to seize between the islands and deserts. My heart, my mind and soul need to be cleared of the confusion and poison that attack my body, like a snake who's poison venom leaves me for dead. Cold and rotten to the core I knew before, what I was meant for.

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tempemendivil

   Hello Quandra, man what a great descriptive write, loved reading this, in fact, added to favorites, It felt so descriptive in fact, that I felt I was there, living it through your words, letting me remember past times... The word flow is well written, as are the words used; however, the mechanics of it, the sentences, or lines are all clumped together. I noted that there are ten lines written here, but it reads as 23 - 25 lines long... It may read smoother if the lines are broken down into shorter lines, which would be around 23 - 25 lines or so... Take good care:

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