Poem - 27 May 2020, 00:50

Void

Eighty-Four Pins is my first collection of Poetry available now! Order on www.amazon.co.uk

My search for nirvana,
Ended at the bottom of a bottle,
In a bid to dilute, to pollute myself,
To get rid of the things that dwelled,
That swelled inside of me,

Day in day out,
They swirled around my head,
You took what you wanted,
Left me for dead,

Not moving left,
Not moving right,
You took everything,
My will to fight,

Left me in this void,
In this place to dwell,
Locked in between heaven and hell,
In the abyss of time,
Left me searching for nirvana,
At the end of two white lines,

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Alcohol Loss

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Tragedy

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Pratibha Savani27 May 2020, 02:36

Love this! Well excuted, versed and descriptive about drinking and sadness, a dangerous combination. Fab! ?Px

Sarfraz Ahmed28 May 2020, 10:35

Pratibha it was a joy to write. A real nice peice, tragic and sad. But a joy write. Thankyou for your feedback.

ℙ𝕆𝔼𝕋𝔼𝕊𝕊𝔻𝔸ℝ𝕂𝕃𝕐27 May 2020, 06:33

excellently crafted verse

Sarfraz Ahmed28 May 2020, 10:36

Thanks for your feedback. Ultimately a tragic peice a joy to write.

Sarfraz Ahmed05 June 2020, 12:51

Proud to announce my first book Eighty-four Pins is a my first collection of Poetry which is available from next week June 1st. It is a collection of sixty poems chosen at the midst of writing poetry. A small portion of the profits will go to Cancer Research UK. Please share and order from Amazon.co.uk the ebook is available to pre-order on Kindle, Kobo and Google Books!. Hope you enjoy it. Any reviews will be greatly appreciated.
https://www.amazon.co.uk/dp/1916276652/ref=cm_sw_r_cp_apa_i_C8P2EbV3QG7YS

Sarfraz Ahmed27 May 2020, 13:37

Thanks. I loved writing this. So sad spiral of devastation.

Being Me28 May 2020, 13:25

This is so well written, Sarfraz. It describes the pain of loss and the destructive behaviours one often succumbs to with such a loss. Fabulous work x

Greg Etsell28 May 2020, 15:00

wonderful poem

Greg Etsell28 May 2020, 15:02

wonderful poem

Sarfraz Ahmed05 June 2020, 12:49

Greg thanks for your kind comments. Proud to announce my first book Eighty-four Pins is a my first collection of Poetry which is available from next week June 1st. It is a collection of sixty poems chosen at the midst of writing poetry. A small portion of the profits will go to Cancer Research UK. Please share and order from Amazon.co.uk the ebook is available to pre-order on Kindle, Kobo and Google Books!. Hope you enjoy it. Any reviews will be greatly appreciated.
https://www.amazon.co.uk/dp/1916276652/ref=cm_sw_r_cp_apa_i_C8P2EbV3QG7YS