Poem -
wake up, feel that pain
Wake up, Feel that pain!
Like 4 Pin it 2How that vein screams your name for that opiuim an crystal game Who can help me obtain the needs to retain my name
Time for change but how shall i gain when I feel so drained These drops of rain reveal tears of pain
Complaints of the Worthless and affaird of what I've became Unaware of the true Pain to hard to explain
My actions protray So again the drops of rain, tears from pain remains the same So this I shall proclaim to all that remains Don't blame the pain
Reframe evil sounds of shame in order to obtain the one who needs to be renamed
wake up, feel that pain
By: Janice E Cook
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Comments
Expressing feelings with words well, that the readers feel it also is one of the challenges of poetry. I felt pain in the poem you submitted. Welcome to the Cosmo! there a lot of good people whom try to help, and have many wise words!..............Jim
Wow great write, so fast and engaging, just a amazing hook! As Jim said Welcome! The Cosmos will be here for you if you need support. Best wishes. TFOTS
Lovely lines, great write. Welcome to cosmofunnel. Warm regards.