Poem -
Walking with my love in Ulaanbaatar,Mongolia
Like 0 Pin it 0Walking with my love in Ulaanbaatar
Through the Gandan Monastery
Silence at the Zaisan Memorial to Soviet soldiers
A key and lotus flower symbols not only of Mongolia, but of our love
As powerful as Genghis Khan
Bordering on Russia and China
I'm thinking of you,
In this cold city
I'm dreaming of you
In this warm heart
I am making love to you
If only, in Ulaanbaatar
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Hi Jai,
Very mystical poem. I find myself wondering if you're really there or just on a transcendental journey. I actually had my wife check "The Zaisan War Memorial", and we found out it's for Russian soldiers who lost their lives in WWII. You've kept us guessing throughout your beautiful write, but I guess you saw, I gave it the highest rating.
Peace and Love,
xox Larry
Hello Larry; i just use my mind to
write the poem and my dreams to
feel the way; i wish i could paint
so instead i write poems, Mongolia
is far away; but the people are dear;
we need to understand their plight,
they love like we, they bleed like we do
so why not write about Mongolia,
thats why I write about Mongolian
love; thank you for reading & thank you
to your wife's research; without history
we would all be dead; luv Jai:)
Hey JAI MASTERS!!....... your creativity is "off the hook" !!..........such gorgeous craftsmanship here....... the attention you give to every detail of how your words reach the ear of your reader........ is pristine!!........a natural gift I would imagine........ and a blessing for those of us who have the pleasure to read you!!....... well done brother!!........... smiles..........T xo
I am not good with praise so i can
reject your talent ideology; really
i just throw the words on the page
in 3-4 minutes if it does not materialise
then Jai is feeling like a yak in downtown
LA; so i am glad you like my poem and
thirst for knowledge on geography &
history without which we would all be dead.
How is Tony? Without suffering there is no
poetry; without healing there is no poetry;
without Cosmo there is no poetry; without
poetry there is no love. I love the poem
and wish you well the poet from Chicago.
Your poetry is very good and I think you
are talented. I wish i could meet you.
Luv from Jai :)
I Know that you write your poetry quickly!! ~ you've mentioned it before........ Jeremy Hennessey does the same......... it doesn't take away from your talent brother poet.......... it adds to your style......... and I like your style JAI!!........... hope to meet you some day as well......... who knows?........ stranger things have happened!!............ smiles.........T xo
I write quickly before the
words disappear!!!
I think if i cook slowly
maybe different quality
or tone; but unlikely
write now;
ok Tony thank you for
feeding me back;
i am hungry!! Breakfast time here.
Where is my brekky?
Where is my egg? My coffee?
My toast? Looks like Jai is going to
have to prepare. Go away laziness.
Hunger awaits.