War Kills Flowers

ย War kills flowers ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย
ย They are born like a bud blooming
ย On a spring morning, innocent and new with no mourning.
Mother is as bright as a sun flower and as sweet as a honeysuckleย
war kills flowers.
8 years go by heโs riding his bike but falls, he lets out a small whimper, but gets up and grows like a young velvety rose..
War kills flowers.
10 years and heโs a strapping young man with a heart of gold his mother who has grown old crying in the cold as she watches his stand in line she kisses his cheek as he boards the bus and smiles at him softlyย
War kills flowers.
Thereโs a knock at the door where two men in uniform stand with pain in their eyes, they handed her a folded flag and a letter that said she should have pride but who could have pride when they knew their rose had died
War kills flowers.
Not long after that mother sunflower sat as the end of his bed she laid her head down with heavy eye taking in the lingering smell.. as her heart began to stop she heard her sons voice..
War kills flowers.

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Welcome to Cosmofunnel !
Staggeringly powerful first write for your first submission to the site.
Best wishes to you. ย :)
Thank you ! every poem ive every though of are usually sad and dark and kind of disturbing to people but i feel like its pretty acceptable here.
You must write in a way that you are happiest with and feel most natural doing ! You will find readers appreciate an honest approach !
Take care. ย :)
Hi Makayela This write of yours is great of theย
true reality of war i could feel the sadnessย
as i read throughย
Great first poemย
Welcome to Cosmo look forward to reading you more
Best wishes Debsย
Thank you so much for your kind words it means a lot, and yes war is a hard subject in my family my grandfather fought in 'Nam he broke my hear when i saw tears come to his eyes as i read it to him.
welcome to Cosmo! wonderful first admission to an awesome site. I sincerely hope you find a good home here.
Thank you so much Iย really do like this site.. Poetry has always been a thing that ive loved to do but the kind i write are seen dark and disturbing so I cant really share it with family and friends because ill be seen as depressed.. Im so glad its not like that here.
Moved me to no end,ย
congratulations!ย
Best wishes
Jai:)
Oh wow thank you!
Its coming down to the last few minutes until they select people for the contest, even though i doubt i will win, thank you for all the kind words!