War -torn earth
Here lies the earth.....broken and worn
Lives shattered ......memories torn
Bodies diseased....from war and hate
Couldn't give peace a chance
They couldn't wait
No love for thy neighbour
No love for thy friend
No beauty surroundings
No prayers of amen
Bitter and hungry
Against fellow man
This is what war will do
By our own human hands
Jealously and greed
Hatred by war
The earth is dying
And this is its scar
Alone in our hearts
Race against race
Turning our backs
This is our fate
Give peace a chance
Love with all your heart
LOOK at the future
Create a new start
Wisdom and words
What can be done
Tell war and its soldiers
"Put down that gun"
Take a look at the beauty
And the future you see
Make a change to the way
War is to be !
Image by Alexiuss
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Brilliant Tina really love this
Maddison
thank you for reading Maddison :) Tina x
Great powerful write here Tina...enjoyed this read so much! x Big vote from me x
Thanx carey -glad you like it ...and thank you for the nom! Tina x
An excellent write dear Poetess Tina Moore, I like the below lines,
Awaiting to read your wonderful writings more and more
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
thank you Williams JI .I appreciate your thoughts ... tina x
fabulolous write tina congrats x
Thanx susan very much :) Tina x
Well written Tina, strongly conveyed. Had a good flow to this piece, much enjoyed. A vote from me hun:)
Thank you Rachel for reading :) Tina x
Congrats on your winning nomination
WILLIAMSJI
Thank you Williams Jl :) Tina x
exceptional!! nail on the head. :)
Thank you very much Laura.....glad you enjoyed this ... :) Tina x
no credit to the artist for the picture?
Artina i am not sure who the artist is -as its a photo off google. would you have an idea?
I am not 100% certain, but it is very much like the comic frames from the writers of Romantically Apocalyptic. I'd have to check hundreds of frames to find the exact match. See Romantically Apocalyptic site on Google. You'll see how strikingly similar the art is. :)
similar but the image i have is "The collapse of industrial civilization "- nuclear war. no comic strip but similar in art. And there are a lot of images -thanks Artina for looking :) Tina x
http://alexiuss.deviantart.com/art/Promethian-Breach-261371631
the original picture, link above.
It IS by Alexiuss, who is the artist for Apocalyptic Romance.
This is life ,yet death.....