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" Warrior of the Sun "...

" Warrior of the Sun "...

Power coursed vividly in her neck and arms and sword
Power made her flesh and blood seem like invulnerable bone
Power shone out from her eyes so bright, none could stare her down
Many tales had been told of her tribe, "Warriors of the Sun",
In a burst of energy she was simply gone
It had been said that this warrior could vanish in the sun
All the tales they told of her were exaggerated , except for one

It's said that she appeared one day in the convenient morning sun, surrounded
by a thousand soldiers that she killed all unwillingly.....butchered them one by one
It's said she wore the colors red and gold, and could vanish into the sky
It was not a noble deed she'd done an errand more or less, for one of the thousand had,
crucified her son, a sun God they eventually came to know, as "Ra" a foreign tongue
A warrior of the Sun, the stories and legends claimed that she had changed her shape
and come into a roaring tiger,  and when she left, her son left tucked inside her
Many times a lonely Knight would stagger into town, and speak of her,
As though she were a God, vanishing from the goodness and fighting evil as a blur
She always stood with the sun behind her back, and when any fool would dare attempt
To approach her magnificence, she'd stare at them with eyes aflame, waiting for consent
But none dare go any nearer to her, she'd blinded many men, with just her beauty
And her overwhelming presence, wielding magic was her duty
They even named their gods for her, and called them Egyptians
The sons and daughters of,  the " Warrior of the Sun"...... 

Tony Taylor  (Chicago)

 

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Georgina Richardson

Another interesting and superbly told story T`, I`m looking forward to the next one. Beautifully written and an enjoyable read, well done. I love the sheer power in the picture just on its own and it compliments the story perfectly. Love G xx

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Tony Taylor

Hey G,  you' are the wind beneath my wings...la la la la la..........thanks sweety........mucho gracias,  danke,  tak so mocka,  thanks little darlin'........ttyl....tony  xx

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Tina Moore

Interesting piece Tony ....was this the same as "the woman clothed with the sun"  in ancient stories? love all ancient tales of knights egyptian's  warriors etc ...love it !         Tina x

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Tony Taylor

Hey Tina, yes, I'm doing a short series on Women Warriors through old folk tales and legends, along with some historical facts.....the research is as fun as the writes.......I've done 4......I'm going to do 4 more....but the truth about these kinds of writes is that you have to take poetic license because it's impossible to determine fact, from words being passed down for generations......so you have to create, along with conveying researched info........so, I hope I didn't ramble too much.......just having fun with the writes......smiles......tony  xx

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Tina Moore

I'm gonna enjoy all your pieces  :)   keep them coming ...:)   Thats what poetrys all about :).....Tina x

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Tony Taylor

Kool,  will do,........thanks for reading Tina.......I'm always up for learning, please don't hold your tongue,.....tell me the way it is.........I have 3 sisters, Tina, Sabrina, and Corrina......just thought I'd throw that in..........smiles......tony    xx

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Tony Taylor

Hey Tina,  working on number 10 in the series it's about an Eagle Warrior who roams the plains and uses her Eagles for distance "seeing"......love this stuff..........smiles........tony  xx

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Carey Milton

Tony

You certainly have my attention with your work!..This is so up my alley of reading material as I have come to admire your story telling techniques :)...This one especially ..keep em coming my friend..You certainly have a talent .  Loved it and in my faves box ...x:)

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Tony Taylor

Hi Carey Milton,  I'm glad you like it kind poetess........I'm doing 8 woman warrior pieces.....this was number 4..........I've been getting very positive feedback...so, I will be taking your advice,,....I will keep 'em coming.......thanks for kind words of encouragement..........smiles.....tony  xx

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