Watery feels
Ocean life

Breezing gently against the sand
Mesmerising waves that are so grand
Water crashes along the rocks asΒ
Seagulls perch upon shimmering sea
And people play or build with their children amongst they
The sun is hot, the water is warm so people may swim the open shore in theΒ
Summer times across the ocean blueΒ
There's much fun to have at the beaches in Peru
While the sky brightly shines above you
Written by Jayjay, Denzy & Affie (c) right protectedΒ
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beautifully written piece
Thank you my little ones will like hearing that as they helped me write it 11 and 8 years that areΒ
Hello Jayjay Jennie...
I just saw this beautiful write!
ββββββI read it a few times...
As I was getting ready to comment I read your comment section and saw you and the children wrote this...
It's absolutely made me feel as if I was with all of you there...
I thought it was just you and me at first...
I'm keeping it okay?
ββββββBeautiful write!
Thank you for sharing...
sparrowsong
You're very welcome and yes you can save it I've so many of yours and other peoples I've saved because they are just so beautifully writtenΒ
Jayjay