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Waves

Waves

A world beneath her hothouse tides
of life unseen; to us, she hides.
But the raging storm? Her turbulent thunder?
Nothing could stop the waves that plunder.
 
Mildewed tentacles of liberated weed,
that soak the salt and float; they’re freed
from suffocating waters that hold them under,
below the sea and the waves that plunder.
 
Bone fragments, carcasses appear on the shore;
collateral damage from the infinite war.
Expelled, debarred from the living and free,
brought to the shores by the raging sea.
 
Tumultuous grumbles as soldiers hold strong,
against the wrathful surges that prolong,
where stones hold steady and thrash against,
the tempestuous water in idle defence.
 
With the light of day on a fading note
the sea goes writhing back,
until fire ignites upon water again
to authorise her next attack.

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Ja

The tides are in your favour
With such a graceful labour
Like a puzzle the words just fit
You should be, very proud of it

Thank you kindly for the lovely read

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John Coggins

Excellent!  Like dblankportrait, I love the line; "where stones hold steady and thrash against, 
  the tempestuous water in idol defence",,Superb! And congratulations for being nominated, well deserved!☺

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Ebrahim Alkadi

So stormy and the words dancing more than waving, full stars.

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Tony Taylor

Congrats!!.. on the nod from administration dear poet sister!!......a brilliant début piece here!!.....ALL STARS!!... well done.... and..... WELCOME to COSMO BRYDIE!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo ?✳✴♥☀?♥?

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K. Moffat

Astounding Poem! The emotion put into the words was felt clearly, great detail! Thanks for publishing<3

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Nine Eleven

Wow, like the deep dark ocean that poem sent shivers down my spine.

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