We First...
I didnāt hear the footsteps as so softly did they pad.
Nor was aware of music that was playing in my head.
The wind was calling gently but its voice no longer sad,
a presence long forgotten was now here all in their stead
Just yesterday around me things were all within their sphere.
My world a place predictable and sure,
but like a maelstrom suddenly, my love, you are now here
this universe has changed forever more
The only sound I now will hear, is soft as autumn rain
Creates the Ā music that will feed my soul.
Who knew how sweet a love could be Ā when feeling it again,
and Ā makes the half of me I was now whole
I hold my breath for fear that on release you will be gone,
and wrap your name so tightly round my tongue.
I freeze with love and silent stand just like a muted swan,
the years all slip away Ā again Iām beautiful and young
For you alone are guilty of the joy that I now feel.
My mind is but a softly focused mist.
This Ā love for you is fathomless, eternal, always real
and started when, my darling, we first kissed.
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Love this romantic side of you Lodi! and love this piece...was not able to record the 5* I wanted to awardĀ Ā but will try again later. Well doneĀ
gosh this could of been describing me. I have done this. Thought of my late husband, felt his energy and not wanted it to go away. Truly a beautiful write, that once again welled me upĀ
pinned and a vote for sureĀ
just a beautiful piece, you are a wonderful writerĀ šš»
Thank you so much Gwendoline for your lovely words. I have been away from Cosmo for a while and sort of lost my way a little as far as writing was concerned ..sometimes we just don't feel the inspiration or whatever it is you want to call it, to be able to compose something new and fresh.But life then choses to throw something positive our way and suddenly before you know it the words and emotions come tumbling out!Ā Love and appreciation of it's effect on usĀ can give us the greatest lift can't it?Thank you again xx LodigianaĀ Ā
Absolutely agree. I was away for a while myself. And only came back the other day. I am so pleased you also returned šš»
wonderful write!.............................................Jim
Thank you so much Jim..hoping to be able to stay around a while longer this time! Lodigiana x
Awww enjoyed thisun too Thankyou Lodigiana ššš
that's lovely Jill!Ā - thank you ā„
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Lodigiana you are simply awesome and a joy to read and behold.
A beautiful piece that speaks for its poetic self.
Thank you so much for this and conveying love so elegantly, in your poetry that shines.
Stay well, stay safe my poetic friend.
Shaun.x.Ā
Hi Shaun, I wanted to write something that was a much more positive , upbeat piece..and to be honest anyone that has experienced love at any age I hope will connect with this and for a moment remember how that felt. We are slowly coming out of the austerity of the last yearĀ so I am hoping things will be so much better for us all..Stay well, safe, happy and poetically productive my friend!Ā Lodigiana x
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